The night
was getting deeper; slowly the stars and the beautiful moon were lost beyond
the clouds. Ananya shivered as the cool wind blew through the window of the
car, she frowned for a second because now she couldn’t admire the moonlit long
drive that she was on right now with the man of her life, the ever so sexy
Kabir Sharma, looking over the top handsome today in his black and white Armani
suit. Ananya stole a glance at him every few seconds, they were quiet yet the
small smile playing on his lips displayed utter satisfaction and contentment
while Ananya didn’t realize she too mirrored his expression, a smile plastered
on her face as she kept looking at their entwined hands, with a blush creeping
up every second whenever he would lightly caress her hand with his thumb. Every
soft caress made the butterflies in her stomach dance excitedly.
She looked
at Kabir again, drinking in his beautiful physique, her eyes tracing from
hairline to his forehead, his nose, and his lips. She stopped at his lips as
the memories of their first date came rushing to her raising goosebumps through
her entire body. The way he had kissed her in front of everyone, not caring
about anyone else, that determined passion is what ignited their kiss like a
fire, and she could still feel her lips burning sweetly, with the sweetness of
his love.
Kabir and
Ananya were on their first date tonight, after he had spoken to her mother in
the morning and gained her permission for their relationship there was nothing
else and no barrier stopping him from loving his girl in front of the world. He
had amazingly asked Ananya out for a date much to her pleasure, something which
she had been waiting for all along, them spending time with each other. When
she cutely complained why he hadn’t asked her out earlier, he had given his
signature smile and replied that if they were seen publicly before Ananya’s
mother came to know of their relation then ofcourse the news would have reached
her quickly, but!, from others and he had wanted them to be the ones informing
her mother about their love because he knew how hurt she would be if she would
get to know about them from others, that is why he had been so hesitant about
things till now but now that her mother had given them her blessings then no
power in the world could stop him from showering his love on Ananya.
Kabir had come
to pick Ananya for the date and had been mesmerized seeing her looking ever so
elegant and beautiful, only when he had found Anita and Armaan had started
giggling, he looked away embarrassed upon being caught checking-out his own
girlfriend. Ananya’s mother had taken her hand and walked to Kabir putting
Ananya’s hand in his, she had taken a promise that he will always be with
Ananya and love her. Kaya left the house after taking her blessings. Kabir had
made arrangements in a posh hotel restaurant for their dinner leaving Ananya
all impressed by his taste. The ambience was really romantic and after a
splendid dinner, to add cherry on the cake, Kabir had asked her for a dance and
they had swayed to the music of their love, the dance was slow and sensuous,
taking her in his arms he had confessed yet again and kissed her in front of
everyone, she had realized he had meant it when he earlier said that “Kiss toh
main tumhe puri duniya ke saamne kar sakta hoon…” he had meant every single
word and the onl thing holding him back to declare his love publicly had been
her mother’s permission, what man on earth could be such a gentleman? Ananya
thought, as they drove further in the outskirts of Delhi.
Slowly the
hustle bustle of the city was left behind, they were now in much quieter area
and that’s when Ananya came back from her thoughts frowning again as she
remembered her annoyance with the clouds for hiding the beautiful full moon and
pretty stars that were accompanying them blissfully on this long drive. However,
her annoyance changed to delightfulness in a split second as she saw some rain
drops fall on her face, as the window glass was down.
Ananya shrieked
in excitement, “Baarish!!” she put her hand outside and felt the rain drops,
then turned to Kabir, “Baarish ho rahi hai!”
“I know!” Kabir
said smiling and Ananya sulked, “Aap ko bearish pasand nahi hai?”
Kabir looked
at her confused, “Kisne kaha?”
“Toh itna
casual ‘I know’ se main aur kya sochun?” Ananya complained, making Kabir
chuckle as he finally looked ahead in contentment knowing their destination had
been reached, he turned the car to the right and halted the car.
Stopping the
car, he freed them both from their seatbelts then turned to Ananya, “Aur agar
main yeh kahun ki mujhe baarish bahot….bahot..bahot…pasand hai toh?” he asked
in a an extremely husky voice, coming closer with every ‘bahot’ he said. “Aur
agar main yeh kahun ki main wish kar raha tha ki baarish ho jaaye aur meri wish
puri ho gayi hai toh?” he asked taking Ananya’s hand in his and kissed her knuckles
slowly without breaking the eye-contact making Ananya gasp at the intensity.
“Matlab?”
she asked breathlessly.
“Matlab…” he
said coming closer, cupping her face, “apni girlfriend ke saath, pehli date pe,
mausam ki pehli baarish mein romance karna kitna anokha hoga haina? Zindagi bhar
yaadgaar rahegi!” saying that he captured her quivering lips into his manly
ones. “You’re tastier than chocolate…” he said slowly breaking the kiss, making
Ananya blush beet root red.
Kabir got
off the car and opened the door for Ananya. He offered his hand; she took it
and came out of the car. Still holding her hand he lead her through the small dark
forest and suddenly they were in a beautifully lit place, as Ananya removed her
eyes from Kabir finally and had a look around, her mouth hung open. They were standing
in front of a heavenly waterfall and the waterfall was not dark because of the
many florescent lights kept on every step of the waterfall and also all around
the waterfall’s lake. A small shed decorated with white and red combination
material with a place to lie comfortably. Luminous light wires spread across
the trees made the place look ethereal. Saying that Ananya was shocked would be
an understatement!
She looked
at Kabir speechless, making him smile widely, “Saare lights waterproof hai…
kyunki main chahta tha ki baarish ho…” Ananya literally jumped into his arms
taking him into a bone crashing hug, giving him butterfly kisses all over his
face, tears of happiness streaming down her cheeks.
“Tum ro kyun
rahi ho?” Kabir asked gently wiping her tears.
She looked
at him with sheer affection, “Aap ne mere liye itna sab kuch… kya main yeh
deserve bhi kar…” and Kabir did not let her complete her sentence, placing a
finger on her lips, nodding negatively.
“Nahi Ananya…
yeh toh bahot kam yeh… tum sirf itna nahi… isse bahot bahot zyada deserve karti
ho… tumhe pata nahi hai… meri life mein aake tumne mere liye kya kiya hai… main
sirf zinda tha..jee nahi raha tha…tumhare aane se maine jeena shuru kiya… mere
saare khaamiyon ko accept karke tumne mujhe apne life mein sabse important
jagah di hai.. to be your better half… tumne mere liye itna kiya hai…uske
mukaable yeh sab toh kuch bhi nahi hai… aur main vaada karta hoon ki zindagi
bhar tumse itna pyaar karunga…”he told her softly, taking her into another
embrace, kissing her hair.
Slowly Ananya
broke the hug and moved around touching the flowers and having a good look
around with a smile on her face, as Kabir stood looking at her adoringly.
Ananya turned
around, looked at Kabir and blushed deeply and Kabir gulped knowing something
was on her mind. He saw Ananya take off her heels and step into the lake of the
waterfall. When she reached the middle of the lake, she pointed at Kabir then
gestured from her finger asking him to come to her. For the first time Kabir blushed,
as if being wet from the rain was not attractive enough that now she was
standing in the middle to the pool looking so damn sizzling and to top that she
actually had the guts to call him to join her so seductively, this girl really didn’t
know she was waking the lion in him. If this lion woke up the only passion
would flow across, breaking all barriers and he would love her till the end of
earth. He slowly took of his jacket and shoes and walked towards the pool
slowly, looking straight into her eyes. Ananya’s breath hitched, Kabir was
looking a sexy Greek God right now and his intense gaze on her as he stepped
into the pool and came closer wasn’t helping her either.
He came and
stood right in front of her, their faces merely a few inches apart, both were
completely drenched not only by the rain and the water in the pool but drenched
in each other’s love, drenched in passion, drenched in desire. It was as if the
line “Tip tip barsa paani, paani ne aag lagayi…” was made exceptionally for
them because right now standing in the middle of the lake, under the heavy
rain, both were burning, the sparks due to the proximity and their intense
eye-lock were flying really high. Suddenly Kabir pulled Ananya with full force right
onto his chest, making her gasp and that gave him her the chance to enter her
mouth and kiss her deeply. Ananya held his shirt and pulled him even closer,
not leaving even one centimeter gap between them.
He picked
her up in his arms without breaking the kiss and walked to the waterfall part
of the lake and placed her on the first step of the waterfall, breaking the
kiss he pulled her hair ardently and gave open mouthed kisses on her neck, all Ananya
could do was close her eyes and enjoy his over-powering passion. As soon as, Kabir
broke apart for a nano-second to regain his breath, Ananya pulled him hard,
making him lay on the step, coming on top of him, this time she took charge. Kissing
his eyes, cheeks, nose, jaw-line, chin she teased him endlessly, till he couldn’t
take it anymore and whispered her name breathlessly, “Ananya…” she smirked and
took his lips in hers nibbling on his lower lip while his hand moved on her
back opening the zipper of her dress. He made her lie beside him, so that her
back was facing him and began kissing her bare back. She had the most gorgeous
skin in the world and Kabir was cherishing every part of her skin with his
kisses.
Ananya turned
around and hugged him tightly. His passion was driving her crazy. She kissed
his neck and nipped on his collar bone as her hands involuntarily opened the buttons
of his shirt. She kissed every part of his chiseled chest, making Kabir close
his eyes and breathe deeply. Her desire reflecting in the fervent kisses, he
knew if she continued, he would lose sanity and they would cross the barrier. He
pulled her up and smashed his lips with hers. Both under the waterfall, with
the vivid flow of fresh water on them had ignited the passion to such a great
level that both could see nothing but each other, want nothing but each other.
Breaking the
kiss, Kabir pulled them up to a sitting position as both sat panting from their
extremely intimate encounter. The rain had not stopped and Kabir knew if the
rain continued, it would not be safe to drive thus he had a plan b ready for
the date too. He picked up Ananya in his arms again and walked out of the pool.
He walked to the shed and made Ananya stand up, he reached out behind the bed
and pulled out a bag. He took out one white kurta which would be upto Ananya’s
knee and a towel, and handed it to her pulling the curtains in the shed.
“Tum change
karlo main bahar wait karta hoon…” he said and turned around to leave but Ananya
held his arm and stopped him. “Aap bhi change karlo… yahin pe…uss corner mein…
hum ek dusre ko nahi dekhenge..” she smiled.
Kabir was
really touched by her implicit faith in him, he was upset with himself for
letting passion overpower him so much that he almost crossed the line but her
smile re-assured him that what happened was mutual and she was anything but
upset with him.
He went to
the other corner and both began changing, they didn’t know why but they felt
there was something extremely intimate about changing clothes near each other,
although both were not looking at each other, Kabir and Ananya could feel the atmosphere
heating up. When both had changed, Ananya sat on the small bed Kabir had
arranged with large comfy cushions and comforters. Kabir took out a box from
the bag and put it on the bed as he sat beside Ananya. He opened the box and
Ananya looked at him shocked, the box had sandwiches and two bottles of hot
chocolate, some fruits, snacks and water.
“Aap ne yeh
sab bhi arrange kiya tha?” she asked him, her voice displaying surprise.
He smiled a
bit looking down, not meeting her gaze, “Haan who actually plan tha thora sa
romance in the rain aur phir yahan par baith kar ek dusre ke saath waqt bitana.
I'm sorry main hadh se thora aage…”
“Yeh aap kya
keh rahe hain,” she said cupping his face, “Aapne kuch galat nahi kiya.. balki
jo kuch bhi hua main use khush hoon… hum pyaar karte hain ek dusre se…” she
looked at him affectionately and he hugged her emotionally.
After a
while both sat down gulping down the hot chocolate as they shivered with the
cool wind blowing on their already cold body from being wet for so long and
they hungrily ate the sandwiches laughing, the romance had surely made them famished.
beautiful and a romantic update.
ReplyDeleteloved it. Actually loved seeing Kabir so romantic.Please don't get disheartened with few feedbacks or reviews. I love yours. Please do continue writing i love them and will enjoy frequent updates too.
Swathi
Thank you Swati!
DeleteThat's really sweet of you :)
I will continue writing for you guys.
Hayyee this is soo cute!
ReplyDeleteI loved how Kabir has organised everything...and the rain/lake sequence...uff mardaala!
Sooo hot n sexy..very very good!
I just loveee your stories...they are bold, mushy, romantic..all in one.
Please do write more!
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Thanks Pooja!
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ReplyDeletethis is such a loving and beautiful peice.
it was cute and hot at a same time.
your stories are always mind blowing.
you are a great writer.
kabir is soo romantic.
and the passion is so clear.
love it.
mind blowing.
love.....
krazykaju.
Kajol!!
DeleteThanks babe! You have been a wonderful support ever since i started!
Flawless!
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Thank you so much! :)
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ReplyDeleteIt was awesome.
ReplyDeleteLoved every bit of it.
Great ideas and imagination
You are a great writer.
Continue writing :)
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