Thursday 23 July 2015

KaYa OS: A Rain Date, After the Date!





KaYa OS: A Rain Date, After the Date!




The night was getting deeper; slowly the stars and the beautiful moon were lost beyond the clouds. Ananya shivered as the cool wind blew through the window of the car, she frowned for a second because now she couldn’t admire the moonlit long drive that she was on right now with the man of her life, the ever so sexy Kabir Sharma, looking over the top handsome today in his black and white Armani suit. Ananya stole a glance at him every few seconds, they were quiet yet the small smile playing on his lips displayed utter satisfaction and contentment while Ananya didn’t realize she too mirrored his expression, a smile plastered on her face as she kept looking at their entwined hands, with a blush creeping up every second whenever he would lightly caress her hand with his thumb. Every soft caress made the butterflies in her stomach dance excitedly.

She looked at Kabir again, drinking in his beautiful physique, her eyes tracing from hairline to his forehead, his nose, and his lips. She stopped at his lips as the memories of their first date came rushing to her raising goosebumps through her entire body. The way he had kissed her in front of everyone, not caring about anyone else, that determined passion is what ignited their kiss like a fire, and she could still feel her lips burning sweetly, with the sweetness of his love.

Kabir and Ananya were on their first date tonight, after he had spoken to her mother in the morning and gained her permission for their relationship there was nothing else and no barrier stopping him from loving his girl in front of the world. He had amazingly asked Ananya out for a date much to her pleasure, something which she had been waiting for all along, them spending time with each other. When she cutely complained why he hadn’t asked her out earlier, he had given his signature smile and replied that if they were seen publicly before Ananya’s mother came to know of their relation then ofcourse the news would have reached her quickly, but!, from others and he had wanted them to be the ones informing her mother about their love because he knew how hurt she would be if she would get to know about them from others, that is why he had been so hesitant about things till now but now that her mother had given them her blessings then no power in the world could stop him from showering his love on Ananya.

Kabir had come to pick Ananya for the date and had been mesmerized seeing her looking ever so elegant and beautiful, only when he had found Anita and Armaan had started giggling, he looked away embarrassed upon being caught checking-out his own girlfriend. Ananya’s mother had taken her hand and walked to Kabir putting Ananya’s hand in his, she had taken a promise that he will always be with Ananya and love her. Kaya left the house after taking her blessings. Kabir had made arrangements in a posh hotel restaurant for their dinner leaving Ananya all impressed by his taste. The ambience was really romantic and after a splendid dinner, to add cherry on the cake, Kabir had asked her for a dance and they had swayed to the music of their love, the dance was slow and sensuous, taking her in his arms he had confessed yet again and kissed her in front of everyone, she had realized he had meant it when he earlier said that “Kiss toh main tumhe puri duniya ke saamne kar sakta hoon…” he had meant every single word and the onl thing holding him back to declare his love publicly had been her mother’s permission, what man on earth could be such a gentleman? Ananya thought, as they drove further in the outskirts of Delhi.


Slowly the hustle bustle of the city was left behind, they were now in much quieter area and that’s when Ananya came back from her thoughts frowning again as she remembered her annoyance with the clouds for hiding the beautiful full moon and pretty stars that were accompanying them blissfully on this long drive. However, her annoyance changed to delightfulness in a split second as she saw some rain drops fall on her face, as the window glass was down.

Ananya shrieked in excitement, “Baarish!!” she put her hand outside and felt the rain drops, then turned to Kabir, “Baarish ho rahi hai!”

“I know!” Kabir said smiling and Ananya sulked, “Aap ko bearish pasand nahi hai?”

Kabir looked at her confused, “Kisne kaha?”

“Toh itna casual ‘I know’ se main aur kya sochun?” Ananya complained, making Kabir chuckle as he finally looked ahead in contentment knowing their destination had been reached, he turned the car to the right and halted the car.


Stopping the car, he freed them both from their seatbelts then turned to Ananya, “Aur agar main yeh kahun ki mujhe baarish bahot….bahot..bahot…pasand hai toh?” he asked in a an extremely husky voice, coming closer with every ‘bahot’ he said. “Aur agar main yeh kahun ki main wish kar raha tha ki baarish ho jaaye aur meri wish puri ho gayi hai toh?” he asked taking Ananya’s hand in his and kissed her knuckles slowly without breaking the eye-contact making Ananya gasp at the intensity.

“Matlab?” she asked breathlessly.

“Matlab…” he said coming closer, cupping her face, “apni girlfriend ke saath, pehli date pe, mausam ki pehli baarish mein romance karna kitna anokha hoga haina? Zindagi bhar yaadgaar rahegi!” saying that he captured her quivering lips into his manly ones. “You’re tastier than chocolate…” he said slowly breaking the kiss, making Ananya blush beet root red.

Kabir got off the car and opened the door for Ananya. He offered his hand; she took it and came out of the car. Still holding her hand he lead her through the small dark forest and suddenly they were in a beautifully lit place, as Ananya removed her eyes from Kabir finally and had a look around, her mouth hung open. They were standing in front of a heavenly waterfall and the waterfall was not dark because of the many florescent lights kept on every step of the waterfall and also all around the waterfall’s lake. A small shed decorated with white and red combination material with a place to lie comfortably. Luminous light wires spread across the trees made the place look ethereal. Saying that Ananya was shocked would be an understatement!

She looked at Kabir speechless, making him smile widely, “Saare lights waterproof hai… kyunki main chahta tha ki baarish ho…” Ananya literally jumped into his arms taking him into a bone crashing hug, giving him butterfly kisses all over his face, tears of happiness streaming down her cheeks.

“Tum ro kyun rahi ho?” Kabir asked gently wiping her tears.

She looked at him with sheer affection, “Aap ne mere liye itna sab kuch… kya main yeh deserve bhi kar…” and Kabir did not let her complete her sentence, placing a finger on her lips, nodding negatively.

“Nahi Ananya… yeh toh bahot kam yeh… tum sirf itna nahi… isse bahot bahot zyada deserve karti ho… tumhe pata nahi hai… meri life mein aake tumne mere liye kya kiya hai… main sirf zinda tha..jee nahi raha tha…tumhare aane se maine jeena shuru kiya… mere saare khaamiyon ko accept karke tumne mujhe apne life mein sabse important jagah di hai.. to be your better half… tumne mere liye itna kiya hai…uske mukaable yeh sab toh kuch bhi nahi hai… aur main vaada karta hoon ki zindagi bhar tumse itna pyaar karunga…”he told her softly, taking her into another embrace, kissing her hair.


Slowly Ananya broke the hug and moved around touching the flowers and having a good look around with a smile on her face, as Kabir stood looking at her adoringly.


Ananya turned around, looked at Kabir and blushed deeply and Kabir gulped knowing something was on her mind. He saw Ananya take off her heels and step into the lake of the waterfall. When she reached the middle of the lake, she pointed at Kabir then gestured from her finger asking him to come to her. For the first time Kabir blushed, as if being wet from the rain was not attractive enough that now she was standing in the middle to the pool looking so damn sizzling and to top that she actually had the guts to call him to join her so seductively, this girl really didn’t know she was waking the lion in him. If this lion woke up the only passion would flow across, breaking all barriers and he would love her till the end of earth. He slowly took of his jacket and shoes and walked towards the pool slowly, looking straight into her eyes. Ananya’s breath hitched, Kabir was looking a sexy Greek God right now and his intense gaze on her as he stepped into the pool and came closer wasn’t helping her either.


He came and stood right in front of her, their faces merely a few inches apart, both were completely drenched not only by the rain and the water in the pool but drenched in each other’s love, drenched in passion, drenched in desire. It was as if the line “Tip tip barsa paani, paani ne aag lagayi…” was made exceptionally for them because right now standing in the middle of the lake, under the heavy rain, both were burning, the sparks due to the proximity and their intense eye-lock were flying really high. Suddenly Kabir pulled Ananya with full force right onto his chest, making her gasp and that gave him her the chance to enter her mouth and kiss her deeply. Ananya held his shirt and pulled him even closer, not leaving even one centimeter gap between them.

He picked her up in his arms without breaking the kiss and walked to the waterfall part of the lake and placed her on the first step of the waterfall, breaking the kiss he pulled her hair ardently and gave open mouthed kisses on her neck, all Ananya could do was close her eyes and enjoy his over-powering passion. As soon as, Kabir broke apart for a nano-second to regain his breath, Ananya pulled him hard, making him lay on the step, coming on top of him, this time she took charge. Kissing his eyes, cheeks, nose, jaw-line, chin she teased him endlessly, till he couldn’t take it anymore and whispered her name breathlessly, “Ananya…” she smirked and took his lips in hers nibbling on his lower lip while his hand moved on her back opening the zipper of her dress. He made her lie beside him, so that her back was facing him and began kissing her bare back. She had the most gorgeous skin in the world and Kabir was cherishing every part of her skin with his kisses.


Ananya turned around and hugged him tightly. His passion was driving her crazy. She kissed his neck and nipped on his collar bone as her hands involuntarily opened the buttons of his shirt. She kissed every part of his chiseled chest, making Kabir close his eyes and breathe deeply. Her desire reflecting in the fervent kisses, he knew if she continued, he would lose sanity and they would cross the barrier. He pulled her up and smashed his lips with hers. Both under the waterfall, with the vivid flow of fresh water on them had ignited the passion to such a great level that both could see nothing but each other, want nothing but each other.

Breaking the kiss, Kabir pulled them up to a sitting position as both sat panting from their extremely intimate encounter. The rain had not stopped and Kabir knew if the rain continued, it would not be safe to drive thus he had a plan b ready for the date too. He picked up Ananya in his arms again and walked out of the pool. He walked to the shed and made Ananya stand up, he reached out behind the bed and pulled out a bag. He took out one white kurta which would be upto Ananya’s knee and a towel, and handed it to her pulling the curtains in the shed.

“Tum change karlo main bahar wait karta hoon…” he said and turned around to leave but Ananya held his arm and stopped him. “Aap bhi change karlo… yahin pe…uss corner mein… hum ek dusre ko nahi dekhenge..” she smiled.

Kabir was really touched by her implicit faith in him, he was upset with himself for letting passion overpower him so much that he almost crossed the line but her smile re-assured him that what happened was mutual and she was anything but upset with him.

He went to the other corner and both began changing, they didn’t know why but they felt there was something extremely intimate about changing clothes near each other, although both were not looking at each other, Kabir and Ananya could feel the atmosphere heating up. When both had changed, Ananya sat on the small bed Kabir had arranged with large comfy cushions and comforters. Kabir took out a box from the bag and put it on the bed as he sat beside Ananya. He opened the box and Ananya looked at him shocked, the box had sandwiches and two bottles of hot chocolate, some fruits, snacks and water.
“Aap ne yeh sab bhi arrange kiya tha?” she asked him, her voice displaying surprise.

He smiled a bit looking down, not meeting her gaze, “Haan who actually plan tha thora sa romance in the rain aur phir yahan par baith kar ek dusre ke saath waqt bitana. I'm sorry main hadh se thora aage…”

“Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain,” she said cupping his face, “Aapne kuch galat nahi kiya.. balki jo kuch bhi hua main use khush hoon… hum pyaar karte hain ek dusre se…” she looked at him affectionately and he hugged her emotionally.

After a while both sat down gulping down the hot chocolate as they shivered with the cool wind blowing on their already cold body from being wet for so long and they hungrily ate the sandwiches laughing, the romance had surely made them famished.


After eating both lay down in each other’s arms, playing with each other’s fingers, entwining them and talking about their present and their future…together… slowly sleep engulfing the two beautiful souls, who slept with contentment crystal clear on their faces, displaying the happiness of being together.

15 comments:

  1. beautiful and a romantic update.
    loved it. Actually loved seeing Kabir so romantic.Please don't get disheartened with few feedbacks or reviews. I love yours. Please do continue writing i love them and will enjoy frequent updates too.
    Swathi

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    1. Thank you Swati!
      That's really sweet of you :)
      I will continue writing for you guys.

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  2. Hayyee this is soo cute!
    I loved how Kabir has organised everything...and the rain/lake sequence...uff mardaala!
    Sooo hot n sexy..very very good!
    I just loveee your stories...they are bold, mushy, romantic..all in one.
    Please do write more!
    Poojaloveskajen from Indiaforums

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    1. Thanks Pooja!
      Thank you for liking my idea :) and my way of writing...it means a lot to me!

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  3. goddd.....
    this is such a loving and beautiful peice.
    it was cute and hot at a same time.
    your stories are always mind blowing.
    you are a great writer.
    kabir is soo romantic.
    and the passion is so clear.
    love it.
    mind blowing.
    love.....
    krazykaju.

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    1. Kajol!!
      Thanks babe! You have been a wonderful support ever since i started!

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  4. Flawless!
    Romance and the description were perfect! Actually to be more accurate every thing was on the spot! Looking forward to more of such piece of writings! *Thumbs up*

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  6. just on word BEAUTIFUL !!
    i don't have words to praise this.
    this os is everything.....
    romantic, emotional, comic
    one more amazing peice from an amazing writer.
    love this os alot.
    awsome.

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  7. super awesome...loved it to bits ....

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  8. It was awesome.
    Loved every bit of it.
    Great ideas and imagination
    You are a great writer.
    Continue writing :)

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  9. This is soo Nice... Pls keep up the good work! I Read all ur OS in one go and I think u deserve a standing ovation! So romantic and beautifully written, feels like seeing a real reporters episode !!! Waiting for more!

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  10. I just luvd this OS

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